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Posted:  03 May 2009 21:59
SABER HAWK COMICS.


’ I all started with that my old house was on fire when i was 9 years old.
I did see a dark man jump in through the window. He helped a younger boy out, not me. I shouted at him, to help me. He did not hear me. But I saw a emergency exit  and ran to it, and took the stairs out. I looked up in the sky and saw the dark man inte sky he disappeared  in the dark.

When I was 17 years old I was trained to be an Assassin Hawk. When I was done there I moved to a city. But not my old city, a new city. Mullvin City. I have heard that a guy names Justin Dope was like a serial killer or something and wanted to check him out. I did my own costume and at the nights I called my self: Saber Hawk.

‘’22:56. Friday’’

‘’Saber Hawk looks over the City, while sitting on the Mayor Blues statue at the Mayor house rooftop.’’

Lady: AHH! SOMEBODY HELP!

Bank Robber: No one will help you, so just shut up!

Saber Hawk: I think somebody will help her, and that is me.

‘’Saber Hawk punches the Bank Robber straight at the nose’’

Saber Hawk: I think I stunned him. I’ll take him to the Police.

Lady: Thanks, Mister?

Saber Hawk: It’s Saber Hawk, Miss.

‘’At the Police Station’’

Saber Hawk: Officer, I got some garbage for you.

Police Officer: Thank you, but we would like to take care of the crimes by our self.

Saber Hawk: If I don’t have been there when this man attacked this city would have lost one more innocent!

Police Officer: I’m sure that we got a police car around that area?

Saber Hawk: Yes, two cops sitting in a car, eating dounots and  listen to Billy Idol.

Police Officer: Yuck, Billy Idol…

Saber Hawk: You don’t get it! Your cops out there was on duty and did nothing!

‘’02:15. Friday’’

Saber Hawk: Nothing bat have happend for some hours now. Maybe i could get some sleep.

‘’Hears sirens of a firetruck’’

Saber Hawk: Remember Ash, never say so again.

‘’Jumps on to the firetruck’’

Saber Hawk: Seems like a burning building.

‘’When the firetrucks stops, Saber Hawk looks at the building.’’

Saber Hawk: I gonna do what the mystic man did wrong, I gonna check after more then one human.

‘’Saber Hawk jumps in to the building’’

Saber Hawk: HELLO? ANYONE HERE?

Voice: Help I’m trapped!

Saber Hawk: How many?

Vocie: Two!

‘’Saber Hawk runs and checks all the rooms at his floor’’

Saber Hawk: It’s all right! I’m coming!

Vocie: Hurry!

‘’Saber Hawk saves the kids, two boys. A pillar falls over Saber Hawk.’’

Saber Hawk: Run boys! I hear firemans coming this way! Find them!

‘’Saber Hawk falls through the floor. But in the last second he shots away a grapple rope’’

Saber Hawk: Wow! That was close!

‘’Saber Hawk pulls him selfs up and is liyng at the floor’’

Saber Hawk: I think I have worked enough to day.
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Posted:  04 May 2009 10:03
Interesting start
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Posted:  04 May 2009 18:48
Thats good, i think How ever i'm out of ideas. So everyone could post ideas here or in the gallery.
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Posted:  05 May 2009 15:15   Last Edited By: new midnight avenger
Does Saber Hawk know how the firestarted that killed his parents? Or who the mystery man was who rescued the other kid from the building and not him?

Just a thought, maybe if someone had started the fire he could make it his personal misson to track them down. But if it was only an accident then I don't know.

And he could try and track down the mystery man to find out who he is and what he had to do with the fire especially since it sounds as if he still holds a grudge for not being rescued himself. So maybe he wants revenge on the mystery man?

Just a couple of suggestions to start with. Not sure how you actually want the story to go. But I'd definitely come up with a primary nemesis for him. Some baddie for him to constantly go up against.
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Posted:  05 May 2009 19:38
Well if you read this http://superherouniverse.com/art/showphoto.php?photo=14006 it maybe will help you awnser the mystic man. What are you saying? That you have some ideas for nemesis or could come up with some?
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Posted:  05 May 2009 19:58
give me some time to think it over and I might be able to create your nemesis
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Posted:  05 May 2009 19:59
Okey. I got one super villian, Justin Dope.
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Posted:  05 May 2009 20:12
true so is he going to be Saber Hawk's primary nemesis?
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Posted:  05 May 2009 20:18
Maybe, i dont know yet. Maybe our Hawks could team up sometimes to fight crime?
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Posted:  05 May 2009 20:34   Last Edited By: new midnight avenger
I've always open to team-ups

I just have to get the current storylines finished first. There is already alot of teaming up going on it my stories. I don't think I can handle any additional heroes making an appearence until after the crisis is averted.

Have you been keeping up with my Captain Midnight and Rovers stories?
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Posted:  05 May 2009 21:01
I have read Cap. Midnught, but i dont know who Rover is. Could you tell me?
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Posted:  06 May 2009 07:59   Last Edited By: new midnight avenger
The Rovers started out as the title The Monster Hunters in the first issue but I changed the title to Rovers for the second issue.

They're sort of a ragtag team of heroes who fight against the supernatural. They've also been dragged into this big catastrophe that Captain Midnight keeps talking about.

The team consists of my native american character Coyote, my holy warrior War Angel, the latest in a line of crusading knights the Rook, and a private investigator with an affinity for magic called Shamus.

The next issues of both Captain Midnight and Rovers will finally reveal what this catastrophe is!!
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