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Posted:  08 Nov 2007 18:09
I know I've posted on here about my other characters "Midnight Avenger" and the Defenders of Justice but since those aren't all that original so I am going to put those characters on the backburner for now. I've come up with something that I think is more original or at least I haven't read anything exactly like it.


The story follows a dimension hopping Cyborg called the Forlorn Wanderer after he barely escapes his own universe while being chased by an army of robots (called golems in his universe). The robots are under orders from the Golem-Lord, who effectively is a dictator that rules the universe with an iron fist, to bring the cyborg back dead or alive.

The cyborg's right arm, left side of the face, both legs, and part of the torso are all mechanical and has built in weapons and other functions. As he travels to different dimensions trying to lose his pursuers he will find technology from those universes and upgrade his own systems with different weapons in his fight against the golems that chase him.

Anyway that's all I have now other than some of the golems that will be chasing him. I appreciate any input. I may even have him crossover to the universe that my superheroes reside in and team up with them to battle the golems.
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Posted:  08 Nov 2007 18:57
Sounds cool.
Posted:  09 Nov 2007 17:41
The Forlorn Wanderer Issue # 1

Somewhere in the Technoverse...

Maybe he didn't agree with what the Golem-Lord's minions did to him, but right now he was grateful for the cybernetic legs he was running on. Of course if the golems weren't chasing him he wouldn't need the extra speed boost they gave him. Even with them he couldn't outrun his pursuers for long though. Eventually they would overtake him. At least he managed to swipe a rift band as he escaped the lab where they had been keeping him. Now if only he could activate it he would be free. This one had been used twenty-three hours and thirty-six minutes ago which means he had to wait another twenty-four minutes before he could make the jump. Hopefully he could outrun them that long.


What can only be described as a metallic howl sounded somewhere behind him. The G-Squad had unleashed the metahounds. These two headed mechanical canines were expert trackers and built to rip off both legs at once when they caught up with their prey. A feeling of dread swept through the cyborg at this sound. He new he had to stay ahead of them if he wanted to stay in one piece.


As the sounds came closer he also heard the shouts of the Dragoon (firearm troopers). These soldiers are the Golem-Lord’s most experienced sharpshooters. He had to find cover fast if he didn’t want to be an easy target. Just then he heard the sound of pulse rifle fire. A pulse bolt struck him on the arm singeing the rift band. Just then the rift band beeped signaling a full charge and he activated a rift without caring about the destination as long as it got him away from the G-Squad.


He jumped through the rift and it closed behind him. The cyborg emerged on a desolate landscape, barren as far as the eye can see. Looking at the singed rift band the cyborg was dismayed to find the coordinate projector had been damaged by the shot and he was not able to control his destination without repairing it. Using his cybernetic eye to scan the horizon he could not detect any life forms or technology.


“I am now nothing more than a forlorn wanderer. What is to become of me?”
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"Beware villains for it is Midnight!"
Posted:  09 Nov 2007 21:40
Now the question is where is he?
Posted:  09 Nov 2007 23:18
That question will be answered in issue 2 which I am working on now. It is going to be a little bit longer than this one.
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Posted:  10 Nov 2007 03:08
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