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Posted:  21 Oct 2007 08:19   Last Edited By: Galactic Man
Here you go.
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Issue #2:"The Date"
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  1 day before he goes to space.

Crook 2:"Now we're gonna beat the living @$!&% out of you."

  They picked Joe off The ground and shoved him against the wall.  One crook held him against the wall.  The other crook brought his arm up, getting ready to punch Joe.
  He brought his arm down, punching Joe in the face.
That gave him a bloody nose.
  The crook brought his arm up again.  Right before he brought his arm down, two hands grabbed it.
  That person pulled back the crooks arm, twisting it.  He screamed out in pain, and tried to punch the man. He missed.
  The other crook that was holding Joe against the wall was distacted by this.  This gave Joe an oppurtunity.  Joe kneed the crook in the groin.  The crook fell down on the ground, yelling out in pain.
  Joe and the man teamed up on the crook that was still standing up.
  Joe was behind the man, so he got a trash can lid off the ground.  He smacked the crook in the head with it.  He fell to the ground unconscious.
  Then Joe hit the other man on the ground with the lid. 
 
Joe:"Thanks..., Whoever you are."

Man:"No problem Joe."

Joe:"Fred?  Is that you?"

Fred:"Yeah, it's me.  Aren't you supposed to be on a a date?"

Joe:"Yeah.  I saw those 2 guys trying to break into my car and I tried to stop them."

Fred:"Geez.  What's that thing over there?

  Fred pointed at something by a crooks head.  It was blue and in many pieces.  It looked like an electronic device.  You could see some sparks.

Joe:"That--was my phone..."

Fred:"Ooh...That sucks."

Joe:"Yup.  Thanks for helping me."

Fred:"No problem.  Do you need any more help with anything?"

Joe:"No, but thanks.  I need to get going.  See ya."

  After that, Fred left.  Joe got into his car.  He got a disenfecting wipe from the backseat and wiped his nose.  Then he threw it out the window.
  It took him 20 minutes to get to the resturaunt.  It is called Italian Palace.  It has all italian food such as original pizza and spaghetti.
  His girlfriends name is Natalie Anne May.  Her favorite food is italian.  She has long, straight blonde hair and pure blue eyes.
  When he got there he saw her waiting outside.  He parked the car and got out.  He waved at her.  She waved back. 

Joe:"Sorry I'm late.  There were two punks trying to break into my car."

Natalie:"It's okay sweety.  I understand.  Let's go inside."

  So they went inside.  Joe told the manager that he has reservations for two.  He told him it's under the name of Rivers.  The manager took them to their booth.

Joe:"Thank you."

Natalie:"So I heard you are going to the moon for two weeks tomorrow.?  Is that right?"

Joe:"Yes.  I am going to the moon tomorrow."

  The couple talked a little more about the trip to the moon.  Then they talked about what they should do together after Joe gets back.
  A few minutes later they ordered their food.  Joe ordered some soup and breadsticks.  Natalie ordered the spaghetti. 
  When they got their food they thanked the waiter. 

Natalie:"This spaghetti is absolutely delicious.  Do you want to try it?"

Joe:"Why yes I would.  Would you like to try my soup?"

Natalie:"Yes."

  The two tryed each others meals.  Then they talked a little more.

  After they finished eating Joe got up out of his chair and tapped on a glass.

Joe:"May I have everybodys' attention please."

  Everybody looked at Joe.

Joe:"I love you so much Natalie.  You are so fantastic.  You're funny, sweet, kind, caring, and much, much more.  I would do so much for you.  I love you more than the world."

  He pulled a black box out of his coat pocket.  He bent down on his knees and opened it.

Joe:"Natalie Anne May, will you marry me?"
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Posted:  21 Oct 2007 09:28
I decided to use the symbols for cuse words instead cause i lik them better.
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Posted:  21 Oct 2007 17:40
Try writing your stories in Microsoft Word so it will help you edit.
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Posted:  23 Oct 2007 04:22
thanks
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