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This is actually the first issue. Thanks Lectrohm for the advice. Don't be afraid to leave comments.
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Issue #1:"Joe Rivers"
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Joe Rivers has an ordinary life. He has a good job, a nice home, and a girlfriend.
He has shaggy brown hair and hazil color eyes. Joe is in his late twenties. He has a normal figure. He loves to play soccer and basketball. His favorite team is the Phoenix Suns. Every Wednesday he goes to the gym and works out.
Joe is now on his way to work in his brand new car. His car is a 2006 Chrysler. He loves it so much. It's black with black leather on the inside. It also has satelliete radio and a navigation system.
He works as an astronaut. Joe went to the station to pick up some papers to look at because he is going to the moon tomorrow at sunset.
Fred:"Hey Joe. You here to pick up the papers right? What are you doing tonight? I was thinking about going out for a drink before you go to the moon."
Joe:"Yeah. I have a big date tonight."
Fred is Joes assistant and best friend. They have been best friends since preschool.
Fred:"Ooh...you going somewhere special?"
Joe:"Yup. I gotta go get ready for the date. It's in 90 minutes. See ya."
Fred:" Bye"
Joe went home and got ready. He dressed in a black suit and a blue shirt. He chose the yellow tie.
He went out side and noticed some crooks trying to jack his car. He walked over there and shoved them away.
There were two of them about 6'3" and 6'4". Joe is about 6'3".
Joe:"Get away from my car punks!!
Crook 1:"Oh, I'm so scared. What are you going to do, beat us up?
Joe:"No. I'm gonna call the cops."
He pulled out his brand new cell phone. It's a blue Motorola Rzr. He dialed 911. One of the crooks grabbed his phone and threw it against the wall.
Crook 2:"Ha ha, very funny. Now you can't call the cops, loser."
They shoved Joe down and kicked him.
Crook 1:"Guess what? We're gonna beat the living crap out of you."
__________________BOOYA!!!
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does anybody think i need to make them longer?
